DLCHASE ART--review or comment

[dlchase]

O.K. I have a deviant art at dlchase.deviantart.com...That's the first thing I wanted to get out of the way.

I wanted to drop off a few things that I have done. I am open for doing any work. If you want to get a hold of me....

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[seraph]

I'll have to swing by your deviant page sometime, but to answer your question- When you make a post look above the 'add smiles' line to the 'add tags' line. In between the picture of the earth and the email icon, there's a small framed picture. That will put up the img and /img within [[]]. Just post the hyperlink to your picture between those two img and /img tags!

[dlchase]

Thank you for the info. I'm going to see if I can figure this out.

[dlchase]

Thanks for the help

[th3rdeyeop3n]

I guess my biggest critique on your work right now is hands. Spend lots of time on hands. I think you've got some good solid story telling going on here so that's a big plus. The only problem I have is the second spider man page. it looks like they're inside, but the last panel, are they outside now??? My mind can't really make the jump of what happens clearly between panel three and four. Although I love the reaction of the guy in panel three as his men are being taken down. I think the best ones you have up here would be between the boy with the robot and the computer and the more cartoony spider man comic page. I dig both of those ones.

[Archerion]

Why did you post you work twice? i noticed alot of things in your work are skewed a bit. When working and if able flip you work while your working on it. The stuff that is skewed will jump right out at ya.

[dlchase]

I was having problems with posting stuff so it accidentally went up twice. I think I fixed it though. I appreciate all the reviews.

And the jump between the 3rd and 4th panel is because Spider-man is hanging out outside and ties up the people on a balcony. The bad guy turns around. He is still inside, but we can see outside because the glass doors are open. They are on the sides. That's the problem there. If I had the whole story up it would make more sense (I hope!).

[dlchase]

By the way, what looks skewed? I've noticed this with my work before, but I have a hard time noticing it.

[dragonflie]

Flipping the drawing or looking at the drawing from behind might help you notice some errors more, since we often miss them when we looked at the drawing for far too long. It's also useful for spotting anything lopsided and drawing characters looking forward..

[th3rdeyeop3n]

The problem in your spider man pages then, is that in the panels -before- the windows are opened...they look closed. That's what threw me. Otherwise your storytelling is good. I can tell the bad guys are getting dragged down and then the main guy turns around, but all of a sudden the windows are opened. So now I have to figure out how the bad guys were dragged down in panel 3 with the windows closed, you see? Also in the last panel, try to pop out those front windows from the background. Now that you mention it, I can see them but before they blended too well into the other building behind it. It looks like Spidey is resting on a brick pillar in the corner? Maybe continue some shadow work all the way down it's side and onto the floor of the balcony so that it places him in the scene more. Maybe even add a shrub behind the glass windows to create a sense or foreground/background. And the strategy Dragonflie mentioned is a good one

[dlchase]

I appreciate all the help