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Post by mistresslegato on Mar 17, 2009 20:40:35 GMT -5
VERY rough XD I drew this one day a few months ago when I actually had some inspiration. I think she's too thin, and the legs are wonky, too. What else? When it's finished, I want this to look really beautiful.  Thanks for the crits! |
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Post by tercado on Mar 18, 2009 19:51:23 GMT -5
You put a lot of detail in there, I like it. You took the time to design nice shoes, the curls of her hair, and the cute lil animals. but,......no underpants? lol  |
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Post by mistresslegato on Mar 22, 2009 13:22:02 GMT -5
XD I was considering some fluffy bloomers, but she isn't complete. I was playing with the idea of no underpants, but it seems a bit risque!
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Post by euterpre on May 28, 2009 10:36:51 GMT -5
she's not too thin, she's preportional to her head and the rest of the body in that respect. Her hips are too wide though.
The pose seems off - as if she's a doll and was propped. Her position on the camera is unnatural, as is her face, but the detail is exelent.
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Post by chargedgraphite on Jun 3, 2009 9:12:45 GMT -5
she's not too thin, she's preportional to her head and the rest of the body in that respect. Her hips are too wide though. The pose seems off - as if she's a doll and was propped. Her position on the camera is unnatural, as is her face, but the detail is exelent. I agree with the last part, about her looking ' off ' in the pose. For something like this, try using a photo reference of a model, underwear or nude specifically and you will get that specific sensuality that I think you were going for here and missed. The hips, however, don't look out of scale to me, however, the pose does give an odd shape overall. I highly recommend using the ' images ' option on search engines for instant photo referencing, as well as searching for other resources. I use a ton of sports figures for my action shots and use swimwear/underwear models for shots more ' pinup ' stuff like this. Even, resort to adult content material for your model's body line if you are comfortable doing so. ( Think class and not trash in this very useful resource for getting sensual and sultry images for characters ). Just keep in mind, as with anything, don't fall into the trap of using only a select style of references because you will get nowhere quick if they all look dolled up all the time and don't have any personality outside of looking hot. Great work so far. Keep practicing and trying different methods. The more flexible and open you are to new inspirations and resources, the faster your work will improve. |
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Post by mistresslegato on Jun 8, 2009 14:57:53 GMT -5
Thanks for the late reply! I'm cool with looking at adult art. I'm thinking I might transfer her top half to a new sheet of paper and take a second shot at her lower half. I really need to stop adding ridiculous amounts of detail before I'm sure I won't need to edit it!
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