Post by chargedgraphite on Jun 18, 2009 7:00:54 GMT -5
One thing I did notice was the sketch of the punching motion on the middle page...be sure and post the follow-through to dig down and around with the finishing move of the punch, as the way you started looked good and then you lose the impact during and after because of the punching side having the leg and arm going forward at the same time.
This would make impact next to '0' on the powermeter, as well as make her topple over in the end of the strike. Keep minor physics in mind. Unbalanced force working with gravity in a targeted source of momentum equals falling on your face.
Still has great form, just watch out for those types of mistakes. Fans and editors DO take notes and will be your worst critics, squash every chance for them to do that in your basic layout practices.