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Post by babybro on Aug 10, 2009 22:02:54 GMT -5
Hello All, I'm working on a piece and I can't figure out what's wrong. I know it's only like a small piece, I believe it's the far arm of the girl (Cara) whose wrapping around Angel's back. But I'm just not sure, hopefully you guys can point out what I need to fix, thanks!
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Post by dlwgosh on Aug 14, 2009 1:31:45 GMT -5
I think Angel's legs would recede rather than come towards the viewer. At this point her leg reads as broken below the knee. I think Angel's hand would need to be about twice the size it is now before it would read correctly.
You have a lot of good things going on here that just need a couple fixes. Nice.
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Post by chargedgraphite on Dec 2, 2009 0:14:36 GMT -5
Yeah, basic 8 & 1/2 head rule applies. Take the time to learn the length of forming the body within that range and then, work on adding in your stylized look on the finished proper framework.
It will look a whole lot better.
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