Testing the waters...

[seraph]

Here's a pic I did awhile back for a guy on City of Heroes. He wanted to showcase his character's electric powers.

[xBORNx]

great lines I like the the design and the contrast

[seraph]

Thanks.

The issue I had with it is the angle I put the head at made it come out kind of odd looking to me. As if his head is slightly misshapen.

[chargedgraphite]

Anatomy is a little off base...you can see that the fists and face don't fit the rest of the body and the thigh there on the right is huge. Next time, use a sketched in frame work, then once you have the body form to the right size and shape, lightbox that sucker over for a clean, proportionate image. You have the shading as good as it gets. It's your basic anatomy that is off.

Also, in your layout, try using more forced perspective, like that thigh being so big shouldn't be. The right first, on the left side of the image should be a little bigger, as it is closer, which will bring the image up and make it pop with more depth.

[seraph]

Charged-

Thanks for the comments.

I need to either construct or just outright buy a lightbox. I'd have saved myself so much frustration by now.