Seraph Sketches

[seraph]

Hey, all. A few here.

The first is a sketch I did of a facial tattoo for a character from City of Heroes. I just wanted to get the 'flow' of the tat down. The goal was to see how I could pull it over facial contours. The cheekbone area is fail.




Second, is just a link due to it being rather large (800 pixels wide).
img.photobucket.com/albums/v14/qualthis/pictures/Legion_In_Progress_by_Bleedingserap.jpg

This one- pencils stage, relatively close to inking. Guess this isn't really 'sketch,' but the all around composition of the piece feels off. Placement, etc. Just unbalanced. This is also where I realized I tend to draw faces much less... 'Steve McNiven,' 'Jim Lee' and more cartoonish.

And last, we have a concept I was doing for a character for a friend.




Thoughts? Hate mail?

[lenneth4]

the last one , why not? but proportions are a bit wrong , the body of the girl is too long
try to mirror flip it
u gonna see what i mean( i hope)

[chargedgraphite]

I agree. The female figure...shorten your rib cage design and tighten the abs to a smaller, more proportioned version. The abs should never be bigger than the fist. They are about half the size unless the character is a bruiser, which obviously isn't the case here.

Keep it up though...good start.